orchestrating the talk

Mar. 19th, 2026 11:27 pm
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Ah those scenes. Half a dozen things have to be done, by people whose intentions include none of them. Particularly not info-dumping.

But things like the heroine's dropping some knowledge in the middle so that they revise their plans to shove off the problem customer on the newbie.

Or the heroine's brother is talking with the king when she arrives with the prince, thus letting it be known what plans the king is making, when no detail is needed.

And they require careful and subtle orchestrating of what is said when, so as to give everyone motives.

sigh

Witch Hat Atelier, Vol. 14

Mar. 19th, 2026 12:56 pm
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Witch Hat Atelier, Vol. 14 by Kamome Shirahama

The tale continues! Serious spoilers ahead for the earlier works.

Read more... )

Visiting with Grandma

Mar. 15th, 2026 11:34 pm
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Definitely click through on this one.
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The Secrets of Story

Mar. 15th, 2026 09:01 pm
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The Secrets of Story: Innovative Tools for Perfecting Your Fiction and Captivating Readers by Matt Bird

A how-to-write book. Despite the title, mostly for TV and movie writers, down to and including explaining that a prose writer has it easier.

Nevertheless, some useful ideas, particularly about irony, such as the character's flaw should be a flip-side of a strength to add reason to not want to fix it. None of the jargon was impenetrable.

vignettes

Mar. 15th, 2026 11:50 am
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This week's prompt is:
trick ðŸŽ©

Anyone can join, with a 50-word creative fiction vignette in the comments. Your vignette does not have to include the prompt term. Any (G or PG) definition of the word can be used.

Be thou my vision, O Lord of my heart

Mar. 15th, 2026 11:44 am
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Be thou my vision, O Lord of my heart;
Naught be all else to me save that thou art.
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A blessed Lent!

Mar. 15th, 2026 11:34 am
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Happy Saturday!

I'm going to be doing a little maintenance today. It will likely cause a tiny interruption of service (specifically for www.dreamwidth.org) on the order of 2-3 minutes while some settings propagate. If you're on a journal page, that should still work throughout!

If it doesn't work, the rollback plan is pretty quick, I'm just toggling a setting on how traffic gets to the site. I'll update this post if something goes wrong, but don't anticipate any interruption to be longer than 10 minutes even in a rollback situation.

recasting

Mar. 13th, 2026 10:54 pm
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All right, that was the problem. I had overdramatized a scene. If I cut down the obstacle to size, she will get by without so much pother, and it will not create a lump in the tale.

look at the paragraphs

It's amazing how difficult pulling a bit out can be.

The Snake Prince and Other Stories

Mar. 13th, 2026 04:02 pm
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The Snake Prince and Other Stories: Burmese Folk Tales by Edna Ledgard

A varied collection. I think a little overwritten, but the tales are a new slice, fitting a new culture. Fairy tales, including a kind and unkind girls featuring a mother-in-law and daughter-in-law, and a unique take on burning the skin of the shape-shifted: the Naga prince is not killed but he is rendered mortal to live and grow old and die with his bride.

Also tales of fools and clever men, and animal tales.

Most are recognizable types, but not close to other variants.
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Temples, Tombs & Hieroglyphs: A Popular History of Ancient Egypt by Barbara Mertz

A light discussion of Egypt. Admittedly covering a long period of history and so necessarily cursory in place. Discusses what records we have and what archeological evidence we have found, and various Pharaohs and changes.

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