ext_6741 ([identity profile] persephone-kore.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] persephone_kore 2004-05-14 07:18 pm (UTC)

I liked most of what was there, but there wasn't enough. You're quite right about the fan-fic audience. ;) Although, some of the problems relate to some of those common in comic-book fandom, I guess.... then again, even they usually make a BIT more sense.

The engines, so far as I can tell, came totally out of nowhere. It almost looks like Darigan didn't know the way to them in his own citadel, too, although since he certainly seemed to know how to operate them the "Follow me" was probably just sort of an acknowledgement.

The faerie who brought Jeran back would appear to be Psellia (never named in the actual chapters, but she was the one who flew up and made a break in the clouds when they were planning the invasion; somebody I've been Neomailing actually called her as the likely choice to catch him).

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