I didn't like the ending; it felt...sloppy? Scattered? Granted, there's probablydefinitely a lot of things I don't know, but, well. Like Sally. Not even a clip? What's with the fairy who brings back Jeran. Oh, and engines? I'm not even a writer and I'm pretty sure we should have heard about the engines before they needed to flip their switch, lol.

Clearly the author(s) have never written for a demanding fan-fic audience *g*.